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[Canadian Fun]

ill

ill

[Final Fantasy 3 Continued]

meh

The Dialogue was really really lame, it was bad; the characters wouldn't talk like that at all. Go back, play the game, try to pick up on the dialogue and vocabulary used in the game. And in your comments you say this is just for people who've played and/or finished the game, But for reason you explain way to many details that actual FF3 players would already know anyway, like too much emphasis on Edgar liking machines, and piecing together the ship. Kinda cheesy, liek the guys. But your actual animating is ok, visual appeal is all right and that’s the only thing that got you points. Just watch out for the pointless conversations going on between the characters. Less jibber jabber and get on with more entertaining stuff. The same story could have been told in a lot fewer words.

incanus responds:

Thanks for the suggestions :) I understand where you're coming from.. that's kind of how I felt when I was writing it, but oh well, it does its job. I'll see if I can make the next one better. :)

[Angry Dan 2]

wow...

dang, thats one really angry guy... named Dan.

[News Flash!! War on Iraq]

hm

wasn't to good, to noisy too. Find a new hobby.

Surfer-Clock responds:

Your Flash movies are pretty decent as well. Thanks for voting 5. :)

[ff3: Betrayal]

mmm its aight

Sugarking productions??... you don't work for a production team called Sugarking productions do you... you just made that up to try and make your film look cool... usually independent amateur filmers say something like (eg: 'A John Doe Film', or in your case 'A Sugarking Flash Film' or Project in replace of film...) Eh whatever, I don't know what I'm talking about.

Anyway, for the film,
I didn't like it, but I DID like your use of sprites, although its pretty lacking now, I believe you'll produce something pretty good after a few practice tries, so keep it at, you only need a bit of experience, cause you seem alot better at it than alot of stuff I've seen, so I'm looking forward to seeing your next piece.

[The Legend Of Zelda Ep. 1]

awsome, you have potential

You're pretty good at drawing & animating for your age. If you keep at it you'll grow up with definate opportunities in the arts industry. I suggest trying to draw your characters (link & zelda) with more defining cheek & jaw bones though, right now they have a pudgy kiddie look to their faces.

grunty444 responds:

thank you. :)

[system interrupted]

good

i want to see what happened to the guy (or girl?) who shut down the system

[FF Fighters - Preview]

*esh*

I make these Final Fantasy Flashes and even I'M getting tired of them :P There are TO many battle only ones made, and even the better ones arn't to great. Try making a story or plot that lasts more than 5 seconds..., and then lead it up into the battle (because people DO like battles... just when its just a battle and nothing else, they're really boring)...
Just from watching it seems that your flash skills are good enough to do better, so give it a try. Think up a plot, story, adventure or something. Cause I do like watching sprite movies, just some content would improve it alot.

TedO responds:

Well, as with most people who do sprite comics, the first one usually doesn't have a great deal of storyline too it. I'v aleady begun planning out a rough idea for another one to come after this and it has a bit more storyline development to it. We'll just have to see how that goes, though, won't we?

[Dante vs Link (Part 1)]

funny...

You already have a flash out, The Hunter,which you claimed to be you first, yet you claim this(Dante vs Link) is your first flash. Don't lie. Liars who are trying to get 'first film' sympathy get low scores. If you change your claim I'll give a higher vote.

D responds:

The Hunter wasn't done in flash, I just imported it. that was my first movie but this is my first "flash" movie.

[Zork - Teaser]

That was good

well you had alot of good art in there. except for the stick people, I think everything else in it looks great, if you can draw actual characters, it'd be a hit, but if you stick to the stick-people, its a bust