t-dash's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FFVI: The Day After Part9]

Its not bad, you put good effort into it

You could make some pretty good stuff, but you're really lacking in cinematic sequences. Its very plain. Your strength seems more to be story writing rather than design and style. Maybe I can help you out sometime. I made a little FF6 sprite flash or two myself, my second one had very positive feed back for its fight scenes. Though I don't have time to do a full animation myself anymore maybe I could do a fight scene or two for you in a few months when I have time. Take a look at my work if you want. Its in the final fantasy section but you'd find it in seconds by searching 'Final Fantasy Vball' in the newgrounds search, it'll be in the list. If you like what you see, leave a reply and a way to contact you. You got potential and drive, and you'll get better as everyone gets made so keep at it.

Vinstigator responds:

Holy crap, I know who you are! I've watched that Vball one before and it's awesome! And I have also seen Gau's Treasure Hunt, it was very good! And yes, my strong point is definately story.

Your battles freaking pwn! The fight with Ultros had me in awe! If I had battles like yours I would definately win daily feature, no doubt about it. My e-mail is [e-mail]

I look forward to hearing from you :)
I would be honored

[Invaded Wars]

nice

its pretty good but waaaay to much dialogue, less talk more fight.

And the next arrows were hard to click on, use an image insted of text.

NuttyBanana responds:

thanks. The next arrows are only really there to tell you to move on. I did say to use the space bar to move on. I'm sure you can see that this being the first part, that i'm just slipping into the story, hence all the dialogue, and the end leaves the edge for the next one to be....well, just action =D I'm already working on it!

["R"]

nice

I liked it. Your voice was annoying at times, but then was good at other points... Also I think you ripped most of that speech. I'm sure I've heard that before. Maybe you came up with it yourself, and others have too in a similar way and thats why I get the feeling I've allready seen/read it before.

My thoughts... my uneducated and ignorant thoughts on the topic... (its still my opinion though, so I'll continue even at the risk of sounding like a dumb fool);
Since our understand and perception of reality is limited to the capabilities of the human brain, shouldn't unlocking it's mysteries be what drives us, not hope... If one could unlock the the human mind, think of the modifications we could do to enhance and alter how we look at the world (just an example, we could allow ourselves to see all the color wavelength spectrum)... We could make existance and reality into anything we wanted so long as we could trick the mind into believing thats what reality was... We could also, should such a power fall into the wrong hands, limit and subdue how people see existance and reality (to control the masses)... just look at mentally challenged individuals, they do not ponder such thoughts to the best of our knowlege. With proper tweeking, someone could produce very obedient, dim witted slave workers out of humans just as easily as they would make super humans... ofcource our race would first have to be able to hardwire a human brain and biologically re-wire it physically and genetically to do that, we're a looong ways off still. Possibilities are endless when it comes to the mind...I think... then again I'm not educated in philosophy or biology... so I could be full of shit on this one. Its a stab in the dark

Tristin T

Da-Dinictus responds:

I say that hope has driven us with our emotions. Of course we strive for more knowledge, a better life. But driven by emotions, in turn - driven by a hope.
Believe me, your thoughts on cerebral tweaking hold merit, they do. And are very much correct as well - you even considered the moral questions and outcomes.
My congradulations, Tristin. Glad this made you think about matters as well.

[8-Bit Misadventures 1]

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Work on your grammar, in 'Author's comments'... you used "their" when you're suppost to write "there" so fix that and you'll get a vote of 5.

CronoCrusher responds:

Ok, you are obviously not that smart.

FIRST OF ALL, your reviewing my movie not my author's comments.

Second of all, maybe you should check your own grammer before posting; "suppost"?

And third, it is correct, "their" is possessive and when I say "Using THEIR idea" they techincally own that idea so its theirs. (However if you meant when I said "their is one part in my movie..." then yeah that should be changed, but since you said author's comments we will go with the first one.

[3 in 1 Spriting Tutorial!]

you fool

damn it man, there are allready loads of crap sprite flashes out there, now the moron's who were to stupid to figure it out themselves will be able to pump out more garbage than ever, and its all your fault!!

Hyper-Anthony responds:

Your very welcome.

[FF Ghetto Chronicles]

it was ok

I suggest you drop this series and try another style. You're good with flash, much better than that FF hood guy... but the story and plot was just horrible, and your slang seemed off, you gotta be a white boy have been so far off... but your profile says you're in england so many people talk different there in the streets.

Silent-Assassiin responds:

I had to change the 'Ebonics' :\
A little because lets face it... Real Ghetto G's just straight up aint funny!!

Thanx fo da compliments though :)

P.S. yeah I'm white!

[Recruitment Drive]

ummm

So... with all this help you're asking for... what is it YOUR going to do? Sounds like you're just recruiting people to do the work and looking to take the credit. In your little flash you should show us what YOU can do, (show off some action script to prove you can make a game). Your ambition may be high, but show us you can actually do something.

Wedge1024 responds:

Well, several of the positions say co don't they ;) But, yes, I'll mostly be doing the coding. I've had a couple people email me, so I'll see if we can't get a miniture preview out in a few weeks. If everything goes according to plan, I'll have to host the movie outside of newgrounds due to filesize contstraints.

[Final Fantasy 3 Continued]

meh

The Dialogue was really really lame, it was bad; the characters wouldn't talk like that at all. Go back, play the game, try to pick up on the dialogue and vocabulary used in the game. And in your comments you say this is just for people who've played and/or finished the game, But for reason you explain way to many details that actual FF3 players would already know anyway, like too much emphasis on Edgar liking machines, and piecing together the ship. Kinda cheesy, liek the guys. But your actual animating is ok, visual appeal is all right and that’s the only thing that got you points. Just watch out for the pointless conversations going on between the characters. Less jibber jabber and get on with more entertaining stuff. The same story could have been told in a lot fewer words.

incanus responds:

Thanks for the suggestions :) I understand where you're coming from.. that's kind of how I felt when I was writing it, but oh well, it does its job. I'll see if I can make the next one better. :)

[News Flash!! War on Iraq]

hm

wasn't to good, to noisy too. Find a new hobby.

Surfer-Clock responds:

Your Flash movies are pretty decent as well. Thanks for voting 5. :)